After receiving feedback for my double page spread, I have realised that my double page spread works well as a whole although it could do with some improvements. One thing I really like about this page are the backgrounds I enabled for either side of the pages. The background on the left is the same gradient which I used for the front cover and the background on the right is an image of some old, torn paper. I think that the torn paper effect is very effective for this page in particular as Edge is a very rural person who is getting old. This effect also shows his wildside and how different he is compared to other artists. On the other side of the page, I inserted a red guitar which I edited in Photoshop to make slightly transparrent and with a watermark effect. This is a good feature of the double page spread because it includes an image related to rock which is behind the text and doesn't overpower the page. The final feature I like is the editing I did on my eyes. I one eye green. This easy yet effective effect shows passion in Edge's emotion and how much of a rock star he is. It also matches the conventions of other rock stars who have appeared in magazines with emphasised veins, big eyes, edited teeth etc. Although the double page spread looked like a rock magazine article, it still could have been improved. The image for example was slightly blury when I took it due to poor lighting. It is too late to adjust this now however if I was given the chance to create the double page spread at a later date, I would definitely take the picture again and re-import it. Here is an image of the double page spread:
As you can see, I added in the CD album at the bottom after some feedback I recieved from my teacher saying that "there is too much dead space at the bottom right hand corner of the page". This is why the album is not shown in the step-by-step process as I inserted it in afterwards. Additionally, I put the text on the right page into columns which I think looks a lot better as the magazine is more conventional of other magazines in its genre.

















